Assignment 22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3
The feedback I received from my last elevator pitch was very positive. I only received one piece of constructing criticism. I found myself in the last video as the person mentioned, shifting my weight a lot because I was nervous to film again. With this pitch, I found myself being a little less nervous but I still don't feel comfortable enough to film more than what was asked. I tried to not move too much in this pitch to indicate that I felt more comfortable with filming.
Hey Juliana! Nice job with your last pitch. It is awesome that you are feeling more comfortable talking in front of the camera and showing your idea to the world! It has been a great semester for us and we overcame some of our limitations together :).
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ReplyDeleteI think you did really wonderful on your last pitch. You seemed much more comfortable in front of the camera and you were not sifting like the last time. Your argument was clear and the quality of sound was really good so we could understand everything you said. I think you improved a lot from the first pitch to the last one so you should be proud of yourself!
Hey Juliana, I enjoyed watching your last pitch! It is nice to hear that you are feeling more confident talking and being in front of a camera. I know from personal experience that it is not easy, but the only way to feel better doing it is to keep on practicing. Listening to the feedback will also help, we are here to help you! Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Juliana! I thought your pitch was great, I liked how you really described the problem before you got into what your solution and product is. You didn't move around to much and I appreciate that your hair and clothes were professional. A few things I noticed that could maybe be improved on would be to show some more enthusiasm for your product and pitch, you didn't seem very excited. This is something I had to work on as well. Also, slow down when you talk because it was a little fast and hard to follow. You did a great job though and it was a very convincing pitch!
ReplyDeleteHi Juliana, I think you did very well on this last elevator pitch. You got your point across very well by first describing the problem in depth and then providing your solution. I think your business opportunity could be very successful in the future because not only does losing your group happen at magic kingdom, it happens at other theme parks and music festivals as well. You kept me interested through out the pitch, the only thing I can say is to speak with more excitement so your viewers feel your passion towards your business idea. Other than that you did a wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteHey Juliana, Very good job on the last elevator pitch. I can tell you put in time as far as revising and learning from the suggestions we have given over the course of the semester. Each time you have greatly improved and become more comfortable with the camera. I found it to get easier for myself over time as well but never getting easy easy per say. One thing I would say is, which I struggle with as well would be enthusiasm, sometimes we are so focused on the words themselves we forget the message and passion behind them. Overall great job and much improved over the semester.
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