Assignment 17A- Elevator Pitch No.2
The feedback I received from my last elevator pitch was very helpful. One of the comments I received was that my lighting was very dark as well as I kept looking down on my computer. I also received a comment saying that they would like to include an example of how the product might help the customer. It didn't surprise me to get this feedback because I agree that my lighting was not the best. I also agree that maybe by making the pitch more relatable to the costumer they will grasp the product more.
What I changed from my last pitch was mainly my lighting and location situation. I think its clearer to see me now. I also made an effort to memorize my pitch, that way I didn't have to look down on my computer.
Hey Juliana
ReplyDeleteGreat improvement on your last video! I can definitely see you much better in this one than the last one. It seemed like you stood away from the camera more this time which I think is good it gave you more energy. The only critique I have is that I think you kept shifting your weight back and forth as a nervous habit. Don't be nervous but try to not shift your weight so much. Overall great job and major improvements!
Juliana, congratulations on your second pitch! You took our feedback very seriously and showed a lot of improvement! I personally liked that the background is clearer and it is easier to hear what you are trying to tell us. Great job improving yourself!
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