I really like the idea behind your pitch and I think it could be a really good product. However, the lighting for your video was really dark and it was harder to see you. Also, I am not sure where you placed your camera but it looked like you were looking down. Try placing it in a higher location. Overall though, a really great first elevator pitch!
That was great! I have been following your ideas and I would love to see it working. Regarding your pitch, I think your tone was too stable. Maybe you could change it a little or talk about a really desperate mom looking for her children. I had problems with the pitch myself, so do not be discouraged about this comment!
Hey Juliana!
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea behind your pitch and I think it could be a really good product. However, the lighting for your video was really dark and it was harder to see you. Also, I am not sure where you placed your camera but it looked like you were looking down. Try placing it in a higher location. Overall though, a really great first elevator pitch!
That was great! I have been following your ideas and I would love to see it working. Regarding your pitch, I think your tone was too stable. Maybe you could change it a little or talk about a really desperate mom looking for her children. I had problems with the pitch myself, so do not be discouraged about this comment!
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